Regret
High Prophet
Joined: 24 Oct 2007
Posts: 60
Location: Brisbane
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 Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 4:53 pm Post subject: Portal 1.5 |
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Portal 1.5
its more like an epilogue to portal, and its not very good, but hey, why not
btw if you dont know what an epilogue is, you =  , me =  , truth =  , and mercy = 
here it is:
Chells eyes flicked open. Around her she could see the wreckage of GLaDOS spread all around the carpark, where she vaguely remembered passing out. As she slowly got to her feet, she noticed blue and red flashes in the distance, as well as mysterious black specks flying high in the sky, but very far away. 'Seems like the combine have noticed this little disturbance'. She thought. She checked herself over, to see if she was injured at all. her Aperture Enrichment jumpsuit was only a little ripped around the arms and legs, but she was fine overall. She turned around, just in time to see a huge chunk of metal catapult out of the gaping hole where Chell herself had just come out of: GLaDOS' chamber lay about a kilometre down. Chell watched as it flung high into the sky, at least a kilometre, then started falling again. She started sprinting to the other side of the carpark, but before she took one step she saw the fence that surrounded the perimetre and she knew that this metal asteroid would easily obliterate the entire carpark, and she didnt have time to get to the fence, climb over and get away. She looked around. If her time down in the Enrichment centre had taught her anything, it was that there is always something. Next t her foot was a white, gun shaped object. She picked up the Portal gun, for of course that's what it was, and shot an orange portal far outside the carpark. She looked up, and saw the chunk of metal coming down, less than 50 metres above her she shot a blue portal into the bottom, just as it impacted. The explosion was huge. Bits of tarmac flew all around, and bits of metal and plaster went everywhere. 200 metres away, Chell wiped her brow. that had been a close call. She looked around again. The specks were much closer now, and it could be seen that they were combine advisors, floating eerily through the air. Chell could actually see the human police and backup Combine guards at the gate of the carpark, getting out of their vehicles. One of them pointed in Chells direction, but when he looked again, she was gone...
Meanwhile...
deep inside the ruined enrichment centre, in amongst 3000 tonnes of rock metal and plaster, a flickering red light turned green, and a robotic laugh echoed around the depths of the facility....
DUM DUM DUMMMM!!!
anyways, what do you guys think?
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